Seems to me if people had have paid more attention to the title of Dan's story (and the name of his blog), they wouldn't have their knickers in such a twist.

BTW, Dan, I really enjoyed your story, despite being able to detect some literary licence and what appeared to be a few factual errors. As for factual errors, I just put down to you had been under a lot of stress at the time and weren't there that long in any event. No biggie.

I decided I wanted to go back and read it again. I can no longer access it. Is that because you took it down for editing? Or because it's had too many hits?


A fish and a bird can fall in love, but where will they build their nest?